CHAPTER 60

Thank you for this beautiful story ❤️❤️🥹🥹

What a wonderful story ❤️

Love is beautiful and does exist..

Wow🥹🥹 I’m going to miss this story

They way you narrated their love after so much they been through you should have given more to the first time sex this whole time I’m reading I couldn’t wait for them to finally have sex

This book wasn’t for me. The writing lacks depth and intimacy. It felt rushed. The couple had no real struggles ( the brother shouldn’t be their main problem as a couple). It failed to show us the basics of the couple’s connection and their chemistry feels made up. The book kept jumping to 1 month later, 2 months later without showing the growth that happened in between. The husband and sister lost a person in common but it failed to show the pain they felt individually and how it was dealt with to a point where they were both ready to move on with each other ( because let’s be honest, it’s not a small ask to be asked to marry your sister’s husband) yet they made the dead sister a non- factor when the two decide to fall Inlove with each other. The book felt like its main focus was on witchcraft more than it was about the love between Mabutho and Amanda. The sex scene was such a let down because after reading the entire book, one would expect to be transported when that moment came but it lacked so much… Not forgetting the over use of Antithesis and so many spelling errors Gosh! 🫨. However it has good bones I’m not gonna lie, it needed a little more time, attention and refinement.

I feel robbed. Such a beautiful story yet it lacked so much. These are two people with a heavy task bestowed upon them. We should’ve seen how their pain and mourning of Moleboheng was slowly unveiled by love, I would have loved to see their love blossom, feel every emotion, get goose bumps and get transported into their love bubble and take it all in. The sex scene was just delayed and the later rushed, it was supposed to be intense, expressing longing and everything else. The gift? I am just bored that the Ancestors just chose this family to save the Cele’s, Nca in particular because that’s basically what the story shifted to. Amanda was said to be a Queen, I would’ve love to explore more of that. Watch her moulded into a Queen, carried by her ancestors and cherished by her in-laws. It was supposed to focus on Ukungenwa ku ka Amanda, show what it means, how it’s done and how it affects the parties involved. Instead most of the time was wasted with Nca. Overall, I would recommend the author does thorough research on our Languages, the spelling errors was a bit too much and everything I mentioned above, otherwise, it was okay, I’m assuming the author just found her pen. 4/10❤️