Right?!!! I've been complaining hle. There's been a lot of broken english. As much as these stories were interesting, they were all over the place. I know writing is not easy, if it was, we all would have been authors by now. I thought I was the problem 😕 😂

Okay, this is everything 🙌🏾 😍
The introduction is fire. It was well structured, everything flows naturally and holds the reader's attention. I love it ♡
I'm super excited for the next chapter.

Impela oRomeo no Juliet.
Also, I'm confused. Why would the dad kill his daughter though. He could've left them alone and disown her ke. Hhayi walwa ngathi he was in love with his daughter 🚮
He's the one who was jealous of his friend. Not the other way around

Awu kodwa bakithi Banzi💔
Great job 👏

You're welcome 😊

So basically, he's not attracted to Simi anymore 😔

Great job on this. The emotional roller-coaster was worth it.Big ups 💕🥂

I love me an authoritative man😊

I knew I liked him for a reason 😂😂✨️